hope hangs thick
like honey dripping from the hive,
soft-sticky amber coating my heart
seeping into open wounds,
filling in the cracks and crevices of hurt,
a salve that sweetens spaces threatening
to harbor bitterness.
I linger long, still tender and stinging,
in its balm
and welcome the slow march
from summer sunlight
into cool autumn air
where honey slowly thickens
and holds strong, solid
those spaces that desperately
needed to be filled with something
sweet.

{This Five-Minute Friday piece was written in chunks because of multiple interruptions by two small children, so it actuality, it's more like a 15-minute Friday piece. Just keepin' it real.}
I love honey as a metaphor; never would have thought of it myself, but this is really beautiful. I'm so looking forward to the cool of autumn; change is good, inside and out.
ReplyDeleteCame over from Five Minute Fridays; thanks so much for sharing some beautiful words of sweetness when it might be easier to focus on the negative things they're covering.
Thanks for sharing your encouragement and taking a few minutes to pop over. :-)
DeleteNone-the-less this is beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Jimmie Lee.
DeleteHave I ever mentioned how much I adore your writing style? Just beautiful!
ReplyDeleteBlushing. Thank you, Anna. :)
DeleteYou include such vivid descriptions in your poetry posts. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping over and sharing encouragement with me!
DeleteOh your writing really does paint a picture and this is just another beautiful example of that. You know what I thought of with your honey metaphor? The fact that His words are sweet as honey to our souls and that with every change His words remain true. Love this, friend.
ReplyDeleteSteph, you SO get me here ... and, well, pretty much everywhere, but way to know where I was heading. :-)
Delete"a salve that sweetens" love the whole thing from start to finish! you wax poetic so beautifully :) my friend- thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteThis was glorious. You should sign up for the poetry writing circle. ;)
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